Nina

I want to start out by saying I like the thought in this photo. The girls pose, the beads and the camera (is is a fish-eye?) work to make the photo interesting. However there are some technical problems with the photo that could be improved if this is to be a print. The light, for instance, is too bright around her face, especially her cheeks, and on the side of her face it is too dark, giving it a weird overall light. The background of the photo could be improved if you were to remove the picture and the items off the shelf, which distract from the image. Also the lens, though interesting, make this photo awkward. Something about it just doesn't quite work with this photo. And maybe its not the lens, but whatever causing that warp should be drooped in order to improve the image. All in all, its an ok image, but with a little work it could be much better.